The journey was tedious. Six long hours on an endless motorway and Reg refused to stop. Not even for the toilet! He’d just done a course on mindfulness and stubbornly believed that the only way to commit to an activity was to focus on it completely without straying for a moment, even for something as essential as a loo break.
But then he saw the writing. It was hard not to really. ‘The Pies’ was bold and brazen and scrawled on the bridge overhead. Reg speeded up slightly when we went underneath and his face changed.
‘What time is it?’ he said.
‘1.30.’ I didn’t need to look at my watch.
‘Hmm,’ he replied and kept on driving, but when he saw the next ‘Services’ sign, he indicated left.
‘I thought we were’t taking a break,’ I said.
‘Just a short one.’ His face was deadpan. ‘I’m rather peckish, aren’t you?’
I nodded, quietly delighted.
I picked up a sandwich in Costa, then watched in amazement as Reg strode over to a pasty shop where he stuffed a steak and kidney pie into his mouth.
‘I’d forgotten how much I loved them,’ he said between mouthfuls. Then he ordered another.
‘One for the road,’ he said.
This post was written for Sunday Photo Fiction
You’re making me hungry, lol.
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😆
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The perfect travelling companion – the pie that is! Great.
Join the Pie Party!
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Yay! Thanks, Keith 😄
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A man’s gotta do…
Fun story.
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Thanks 😄
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Peckish! Clemmed! Love the language.
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Once an idea worms it’s way into your head, it’s hard to get it out. Besides, traveling requires sustenance. Nice job.
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The graffiti probably caused a surge in the sale of pies! Now you have made me fancy one! LOL!
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Me too!
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LOL rather like a flash fiction prompt…it just grabs you and you have to go with it. Very clever 🙂
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Haha. He was passing his favourite place to eat pies. Gotta stop for that. Thank goodness for everyone else.
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Heh great story. How one word can change your outlook. I enjoyed this.
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Thanks 🙂
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Nice written. I like that he went for a steak and kidney pie, instead of the normal fruit pies. Gave the story a nice twist and I couldn’t see him eating a regular pie anyway. Just doesn’t seem the type.
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Thanks.. It made me go out and get one!
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